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The Overflowing Bra

Leticia Latex
Triple Hex
Candace, a bitchy feminist, is hexed by a vindicative stripper when she catches her boyfriend at the stripclub.  Over the next few days, she discovers the triple nature of her curse as she's slowly turned into a hugely busted slut and later on fully transforms into a living, inflatable latex lovedoll.  Comments appreciated.  I have other doll stories, most have BE in a way but the focus is more on the doll aspect.  I will post if people are interested in reading more.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Nicely written. loved it, very unique.

Leticia Latex
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

(Rated average to keep scoring intact and impartial)

Thanks a lot for all the great comments, happy to see people interested despite the admitted lack of BE.

Don't let that sort of thing bother you. It's hindering your own enjoyment of the story. Surely you don't overanalyze the mechanical devices used in 'science' stories? (For your sake, I hope you don't).

A little background first and a part of why I'm actually replying: I AM actually a latex fetishist, and not just by watching pictures or movies. I actually own and wear latex. I also happen to make my own clothing so am well aware of the technical aspects and how it is glued and not a heat process like vinyl is.

The reason I do it is only for convenience. Technically, I much prefer latex to vinyl which is why the dolls are stretchy and overinflatable. They also have the sweet smell and touch of latex. The vinyl reference is for the exact reason you point out: I want these dolls to have seams, and latex would only leave flat seams and not the protruding kind that I want visually.

The 'latex isn't shiny' made me raise an eyebrow as well. If you really want to get that technical then sure, raw latex doesn't shine. But latex used in garments does shine on one side of it, and it admittedly doesn't shine as much as when it's lubed up... but imagine those dolls shined up with lube or silicone spray... messy and oily.

So I guess my dolls are made of a material that shares properties of both materials but I didn't feel like giving it a new name.

I just wanted to explain the reason I did it wasn't ignorance, just convenience. Otherwise, I would agree with you as I usually get ticked when I see someone describing an obvious PVC garment (or nearly any shiny fabric) as latex. It is SO not the same thing.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Loved your story!

That's all.

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I definitely find the doll thing interesting, but there is one technical bit that bothered me.

Latex is not shiny, and it does not have seams!

*Vinyl* has protruding seams from when different panels are seam-welded together thermally. Latex, on the other hand, cannot be bonded to itself except through adhesives, and that produces a rather poor quality bond. Therefore, latex models with thin walls are therefore slush-cast as a single piece.

Note: vinyl is not rubbery at all, and has basically no stretch.

If you're going to fetishize something, at least get the technical aspects right.

(Sorry, but technical details totally ruin my immersion. Can you tell I do engineering?)

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I love latex stories and am glad to see your are writing again. Perhaps a little more detail in the BE department, but the transformation to latex is so much fun. I can't wait to read more!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I enjoyed this immensely. If you aren't already, could you submit these to as well? I'm sure there are people there that would enjoy your writing.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great writing. Wish she had gone back to something between the slutty bimbo and a complete fold-her-up-and-put-her-in-a-box doll, but still a great story.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Would love a little more be, but is a great story.

Can't wait for more

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Story had a good pace with good characters.

Dan Standing
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Really great story, truly enjoyed it. I like a mix of genres so this was right up my alley. Gonna have to track down those other stories...

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I enjoy the love doll aspect of this story. The more love doll transformation stories with breast/butt inflation the better!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wow, Leticia, it's great to see you writing again - it's been ages since you posted those two stories over at fictionmania. Keep it up.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I wouldn't normally enjoy a story like this but this was is very well-written and nicely-conceived. It moves along at a good clip without feeling like it's skimping or omitting much. I agree that I'd love to see more BE. Or, a story from you that is strictly an implant story would be great. You have a knack.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

After reading this I'm honestly confused as to why people find this sort of thing appealing. I'm not one to judge, but (spoiler) preferring to be an inflatable doll.. preferring to screw an inflatable doll vs a real girl? I wish I had that problem, I could just go buy a blow up doll and be set.

Wonderfully written, I truly wish for my own selfish reasons you would focus on BE and drop the latex, but that doesn't seem to be your style. There is very little BE in this story, and though enjoyable, it is morally and sexually strange. If blow up dolls are your thing, this story is for you. If they aren't, it's a well written tale that will leave you asking "what the fuck?"

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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