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Faeophobia: Cloudy with a Chance of Pixies, Part 1
a XXXecil for Hire story.

I was commissioned to write a continuation of Faeophobia: What Boys Like, revealing the future of a pixie named Lisa, with a tendency to cast spells that shrink men into living sex-toys. A mysterious phenomenon is sweeping through the city; putting any man with a cock between his legs at risk of massive, magical orgies. Nymphomaniacal transformations abound in this vast story that reveals the fate of Lisa, her boy-toy Matt, their friends, enemies, coworkers, parents of their enemies, nerdy friends, and a shady pixie that can match Lisa spell-for-spell! Breasts will expand, libidos will multiply, and a sex-drenched city will moan with magical delights.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

XXXecil, Gentlemen.

Always a master of the art.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

XXXecil, you are one of my favs. Great story, and I like where this is going! MOREMOREMOREMORE!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Another wild ride from XXXecil. My favorites were the couple of transformations of the human women into hypersexualized nymphomaniacs. My main criticism is that it could have used one more quick pass for some additional copy editing.

And an overall compliment: if I were given the chance to pick a fictional universe in which to live, the world of Faephobia would definitely be on my short list. If nothing else, it definitely wouldn't be boring -- or chaste.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story! I especially loved your loving description of the overwhelming hornieness of the Flocking. Also great to see the return of the blissed-out human dildo smaller than his own equipment (one of my favorite plot twists). Lisa (and todd and damien) rules!

Can't wait to find out more!

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