The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Midsummer Dream (Corrected)
By request. Twin sisters on a vacation with their Mum meet a strange trio of women at a beach resort. Stella and Bella have their issues, but how will they react in the presence of three sexed up women and a magical, bust enhancing dildo?

Apologies for the previous bad upload of this story.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story didn't really go past 'the line' perhaps as pushed against it. In using teenaged girls in such a situation, it's best to keep the graphic nature down. If teenaged girls get victimized at all in a 'dark' story it should be used only as a plot device. Enticing the imagination rather than (for some here) slapping it. I'm a little sicker than most, I liked it. Now I have you to thank for showing me where that line really is, for the perusers of the Overflowing Bra.

Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Agree with Siluss on this one, this story crosses a line and in my opinion should not be posted here

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is very good. I wish all stories here connected BE to actual sex--as opposed to it being so abstracted and desexualized--and the fact that everything was non-consensual only made it that much more exciting. Please continue in this vein!

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

This story is a real story and fairly well written but it is an antp-BE a cautionary tale about wanting larger breasts. I didn't enjoy it but I did appreciate the workmanship.

Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

CAUTION: strong language, potentially offensive

The story itself is solid, and good character building and descriptions. However, I was turned off, simply, by the combination of underage persons and what can only be described as rape. That is a combination which is a major turn-off for me.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

While the NC tones were perhaps a bit strong, I liked the tension and mental transitions built as the story progressed. The take on identical twins experiencing different levels of a trigger was good to see rather than a "double the pleasure, double the fun" approach.

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