Some transitions in body positions were left out. e.g. from standing to on bed all of a sudden. Still, to have a time traveler visit Roman times and find a means of erasing their memories to avoid the question of changing the past, that was good. Wish I could write a decent story as short as this one. I tends to end my stories at over 60k words. Nice having a nice alien experience too.
Good story. It was a little hard to get into at first but I started to like it more towards the end. Also the few random Star Trek references brought a smile to my face. Overall a good story.
Dagnabbit! 5 months (or more) I spend on this story, and I didn't get the comments to be accepted!
Hokay, for those who actually find this text - this turned out to be a better story than it was BE. I love bit tits (and I cannot lie...;) I like writing about stacked women, but after all these years, trying to come up with something new and fresh (tit sizes not tied to fruit or sports equipment, etc...;)It's becoming more of a restraint on the story than coming up with the story. I ain't saying 'never', but I'm probably going to be a more infrequent contributor.
As usual, there's so much non-erotic action, I've put in the usual sign of 'the good stuff', which is the ~ symbol. Have fun, and you never know, I might be back again some day.