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The Overflowing Bra

The Story of Our Homecoming (Illustrated)
Another Sequel to "The Tale of Our Isle," continuing the story of "Grandma Annie's Sea Journal."  William and Arianna's adventures continue in America, where they also encounter trouble.  (Very long) Includes drawings from Grandpa Bill's long-lost sketchbook. (I'm not partial to writing sequels, so if you would like this series to continue, please leave some feedback.) 
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I finally finished this story and the series that it is part of. Overall I really enjoyed the story, the main characters and the general plot. I was a little disappointed with the rather short wrap up of the story. Maybe this is the author's way to see if we want more. There was some illusion in the story to how the children of Annie and Bill had both big breasts and big members and how the great grandchildren also had these characteristics. I think it would have been nice to tell us of how Bill and Annie went from being barren on the island to being so fruitful in the mountains. I guess we can only hope for a sequel, maybe with a story of the children and their adventures as young adults.

I am looking forward to a new story from Eggs, I do hope it happens soon. Lastly, the illustrations in all the stories were a very nice addition. This reader thanks you for all your posted works.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I have loved this series from the first, it is such a well crafted tale and the characters are so endearing. you immediately fall for them. You can tell that a lot of heart and soul went into this story. I do however think that things finished a little suddenly and a final episode detailing the discovery of their new homestead and their, already hinted at, success in re-developing their sex melon harvest and any impoved or changed effects that growing the melon in the mountain earth may have on them, this and Annie's legacy being realised. A real ripping yarn, so rare in this medium of fiction. Keep up the good work.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great series! However, I think a new story would also be excellent, as variety is the spice of life, and it'd best serve your creativity.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another triumph. The world is richly imagined, the characters are charming, and the description is top notch. Excellent work.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The quality of this series has been outstanding from the get go. Congratulations for such a worthy series.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Same here, I'd really like to see them go bigger as well. But this is definitely one of my favorite series on this entire site, hands down. Please do more!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

All in all, well written, rather exciting even at the face of repetition (A big thumbs up for being so creative) - I would love to see further adventures of this duo and their friends. Also I concur with Cman, their over-indulgence is rather charming, considering how madly in love they are with each other.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another enjoyable story from Eggs. Well written, fun, and exciting.

My only suggestion would be to go bigger :) I love their over-indulgence.

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