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The Overflowing Bra

The Dark Trianni
Ero Sage's Forbidden Spells
Breath of Fire II themed story: Katt wakes Nina from a pleasant sleep, brandishing a strange spell book she found. Nina warns to use caution, but Katt seems to have other plans. Or rather, the book does. (Breath of Fire II is owned by Capcom, not by me.)
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Blaze knight
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Nice BE story based of BoF. Reads nicely for erotic entertainment.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I've never played Breath Of Fire and I enjoyed it.Nuff said

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Looks pretty good overall, no real complaints about any facet. The bit with Ryu at the end wasn't so much to my tastes, but there wasn't anything specifically wrong with it. The "dumbening" was handled better than most, and technical quality overall was pretty good. Possibly could have benefited from a little tightening up in some places, but that's probably expecting too much from porn.

Would definitely like to see some more from you, this shows definite promise.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

LOVED IT, I please keep up the great work. It was getting epic there when she started layering those spells.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

I sometimes forget how erotic a stupid big breasted horny chick can be. It's definitely hot. But unfortunately, in the end, it's empty. Interesting tongue fetish.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Easy to fap to.

Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

I still don't get why ment shows up so much.

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Maybe it is because I am such a fan of Breath of Fire 2 or have seen and saved Blooberboy's old BoF stacks, but this story was pretty good. Kudos. Not the best I have ever read, but generally quite good. Thank you.

Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

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