The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Pi-We
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Average Scores:

Q
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Dafuq was this? Can we get the quality control squad in here plz?

Anastation
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

"full of interesting chtracaers" made far more interesting as they get interpreted by your pen. Your eye and your vision have gotten better and better, my friend. I'm wowed everytime I see something new from you

Anastation
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

"full of interesting chtracaers" made far more interesting as they get interpreted by your pen. Your eye and your vision have gotten better and better, my friend. I'm wowed everytime I see something new from you

twe
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

The language is to horrible to enjoy the story...

mtb
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

I got lost at the first sentence. The title was the only thing that was coherent, and I have no idea how it might've related to the rest of the story.

Here's why I know you didn't proof your story:

The zip file contained one file, which was titled "Unbenanntes Dokument.txt," (for those who don't understand German and can't guess, that's "Untitled Document." Seriously?

Dude, if you want honest feedback from the community here, give it some effort.

Clarissa
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Can we add '0' (zero) to the ranking scale?... or negative values?

ProfessionalReviewer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is a genuine work of art. The characters are realistic, the story is engrossing and highly erotic. Possibly one of the greatest BE stories on this website!

MrNiceGuy
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Pi-We please try writing in your first language and then asking someone to translate. That would help us to read it and help you with learning English.

K
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

to short, to bad and to messed up !

Erazor
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

too short and really bad english :(

nobodyyouknow
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

what is this i dont even

Big is Best
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Wow,this could be possibly the worst story I've ever read, couldn't even make it through the first five lines. Pi-We needs to learn the basics of grammar and spelling before he even tries to write anther story. Don't contribute again, it'd be for the best.

The Almighty Popo
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

I read the first few lines, and I could no longer take it. There are no individual technical errors. The entire thing is one huge error. A few mistakes here and there are permissible, but when you can't even tell what's going on, then something's wrong.

Charlotte
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Completely unreadable.

TheNewNo2
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Technically inept, impossible to read.

Noobhunter
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Very bad grammar and spelling. Also too short.

Blerg
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

too short and the English is bad

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