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The Overflowing Bra

The Dark Trianni
Dreams 1: The Unbirth of Adolescence
This is going to be the start of a possible series of short stories (this one is 3 pages long) involving a look at bizarre and very sexual dreams by normal young women. WARNING, though, this is pretty weird and is not for everyone. Tonight's dream is unbirthing. You have been warned, I don't want any complaints.
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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Pleas more freaky transformations.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

To me, it was a good story to read.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I enjoyed it. I think the age regression was more what should have been warned about, but strangely I enjoyed it too with the way you wrote it. I look forward to more!

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I think it's a good idea for series.I don't participially like unbirthing but I still enjoyed this story!There will probably be people that will bitch about not every story in the series being primarily about breast expansion but it's cool with me.I can't wait for the next one!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I very much enjoyed this dream story and for a 3 page starter I look forward to the other stories.

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