The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Get me Rewrite!
Final story for the day...this is what I should be writing 'she gets in, she gets big, she gets out' that everyone is hoping to find. Have fun...;)
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Man you know you love breast growth when you want more of it to occur in a story where there was plenty.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Good job! Fun, quick, and sexy. I like how she valued her new boobies more than the contract. Kinda left me wishing for more character development, but you warned us.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great story. I would've liked it to go on longer, but that's a minor complaint. Thanks for writing!

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