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The Overflowing Bra

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And another...more of a 'what if' than hardcore, but hey, free's free, right?
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I really liked the twist at the end... I didn't see that coming and it really makes the story more interesting!

I really like the idea of expanding researchers in the hopes that they will develop a control mechanism for the growth. All of it for money. You dropped the characters into a believable charade. You are good at that.
One common character I find in a lot of your fiction is the "Foil" .. in your stories, the foil is usually a friend or cohort that contrasts to the protagonist in that they are usually the ones that get REALLY big boobs instead of the main character. It seems to satisfy your requirements of 'massive' size desires without ruining the main character. In this story, it's the technician. In 40's it was sort-of an antagonist, the asian BE cream technician. In Katya, it was the bath-girl. In Heavenly, it was the best friend. I'm not complaining.. just making an observation.

If I had to do it, my first instinct is to drop your characters in a controlled environment, like a space station or an underwater laboratory.. where they couldn't escape... or they wouldn't be picked up for months and they were forced to figure out the "antidote" or they would die.. but they were so horny they couldn't focus. And the "bad" guy was sent by the pharmaceutical company to infect the biologists.. but he ends up getting infected too and then gets too big and ends up getting himself killed.. i know, i know.. very abyss.. but with BE and pharma instead of aliens. Hmm.. thank you for the inspiration! Good Job, as always, keep up the good work.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Thanks, guys. Actually the FDA thing was deliberate, didn't want to @#$ off the government. I admit I should pay more attention to bra sizes, but it's been done to death sometimes. There's a thread at that other archive site of BE that they go through the 'sports equipment/fruit/bra sizes', and it's a challenge that I've taken up in trying to describe them.

In a way, 'roaring 40s' is sort of a sequel to this, though I didn't tie the two together visibly. I'll keep the idea in mind...could develop into an international mafia...though Mr. Big of Bimbo Tech has probably already beaten me to it...;)

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Good stuff, as usual. I agree with ktc, this begs for another chapter. Otherwise, same minor nitpicks as before, some typos (FDA or DFA?) and cup size errors (DD = E, DDD = F).

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fantastic. Quirky humor, interesting characters, and a good plot. In fact I feel a sequel of just a sex story, and possibly an explanation of how big Terri does decide to get, wouldn't be asking for too much as far as I'm concerned.

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