The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Wish Come True
A story of Michelle, jealous of another girl named Lyza for her assets. She uses a spellbook to improve her figure, but gets more than she bargained for. 

Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

It's OK. There are several technical issues, to the point that it distracted me a bit. I found it hard to follow when breast sizes were going up and down and up and down so much.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I liked it. I do agree with Esuna in that your BE could be spiced up a bit. I've come to the point where I comment only to praise. Please keep writing, you have many readers who may never say anything.

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Very bland and by the numbers. It feels like all your stories are ones I have read before. Very basic plot structures, one dimensional characters, and the just there. Its not very sexy.

Another Anonnymouse
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really liked it. Technically fun and enjoyable.

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