The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Curves: Part One and Two
An ancient alien spacecraft gives three curvy MILFs some new curves. In parts one and two, Charlotte is first. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Good! Agreed, needs more BE but would like to see where this is going!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good story so far, but not very much BE. Hoping there will be more in the next installment!

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