The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A man reminisces on the extraordinary life and times of a friend at her funeral.

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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I agree with the person before me. I would like to see a story like that as well.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A bit more description of the growth itself would have been nice, but your writing style is excellent! I'd love to see you tackle a story involving young girls going through an early puberty... no sex of course, but there's a real lack of "growth due to puberty" stories... especially ones where the girls get real big within a real short timeframe.

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