The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Rebecca the Reluctant Bimbo
In the same universe as the previous Lucy series, this is the story of Rebecca and her friends in a world where drinking bimbofying milk is normal.

Critiques and criticism are welcome as always.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

No complaints here! I loved everything! Please write more.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This was an excellent story with a great premise and it was written well. The only complaint I could really level against it is that I would like more in depth descriptions of the BE and just more of it in general. Looking forward to see more in this setting.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Straight to the point and easy to read thanks to good grammar and spelling. I have not read everything so I can hardly give a full review, but I like this!

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