The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bad Irving
Leprechaun Wishes
A wish to be attractive has unexpected consequences for a clever young man.
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Will It Work
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

A well done story, fairly good plot. Some of the reactions are a stretch, bu tit is quite funny to read the section with stripper choices. The story (and its sequel are very moralistic... Was that intenfded?)

Overall, good work.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A fairly good story. Well done.

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