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The Overflowing Bra

Bad Irving
Leprechaun's Revenge
Seamus O'Shanty the Leprechaun returns for revenge on Bobby and her stripper friends.
Average Scores:

Will It Work
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

The story, while good, is not as enjoyable as the previous one. Many of the scenes feel rushed, and the demon mechinic feels like an out. Otherwise fairly well done.

In several scenes, characters drop their "accent".

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A good follow up series (yes it is a series; the site doesn't have all the parts) to the original story.

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