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Cowgirl Flu 2: Cowgirl Tower
The sequel to my previous story "Cowgirl Flu". After Erica caused the flu to evolve into a new, more potent strain, what are the aftereffects for the apartment she lives in?

Also contains the original "Cowgirl Flu" with more viewing options, as requested in some initial reviews.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Really well written. Stories where the plot unfolds so well are rare in this genre.

The Light Fantastic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Absolutely masterful.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Again a totally amazing story on every level and I look forward to more of your writing!

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