The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Plato Voltaire
Ample Amber
In this Police Blue episode Amber is sent undercover to a high school to nab a blackmailing pervert.
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Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Needs more BE. The thought occured that the lack of the reader's knowledge of such Sci Fi terms as nanites might cause the reader to become disinterested in reading or continuing to read Sci Fi stories such as this.

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