The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bad Irving
SRU: The Contract
A frustrated BE author signs with Spells-R-Us for revenge on those who rip his tales to shreds.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I loved this! Funny and interesting while managing to avoid many of the cliches the infest these types of stories. Nice attention to detail as well. Great job overall!

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