The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

black_eagle
The Scrimshaw
Mark agreed to magically lend his roommate some masculinity for a track meet. But while his roommate gets beefier, Mark finds himself getting more and more feminine.
Average Scores:

TYDAL
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Phenomenal!!!
John
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved it hope to see more from you
katedraffen
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love the slow transformation that he got to spend some time enjoying and discovering the changes Would love to hear more from this universe or anything else your mind wants to put forth onto a page Keep it up 
FireFox
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This ones goes straight to my favorites  Light on the BE descriptions and the ending was kinda rushed too  Hope to see a continuation to this story
ethereal
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed this story.  I would liked more at the ends. I hope you write more TG stories like this one! (Or more on these three characters)
tb
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Keep writing! Amazing.
YY
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
excelent story!
Paul
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
One of the best stories I've read on here! Keep it up, I'd love to see where this goes.
Pioneer
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really did like like this story alot. But just as my previous raters i missed the description on the growth itself a little. Still - amazing story.
What about letting both use the bone on some other people?
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Goes a little too fast at the end, but an absolutely fantastic story.  I would love to hear more about the huge sizes at the end in further adventures of these two.  Maybe seeing what the limit is?
karen
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I like the premise. Trading places is one of my kinks.  the BE was rushed. but the story  was cute.  I enjoyed it.
GeoffK
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Hot story and well-written, but the bust descriptions weren't very precise or clear.  It's really more of a TG than a BE story.  But, if you're into that, it's a good one.
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