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The Overflowing Bra

Plato Voltaire
Badge of Bronze
On Halloween night the cameras catch the action as Lyn and June confront a breast-enlarging evil spirit on a live-action police show.
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I skipped alot of parts otherwise I'd have been reading for days I think, but maybe its because I'm tired. Either way I liked it, although Im not completely sure what I thought about how the police ended it.

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