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The Overflowing Bra

codexdrinker
Mia's Recovery
Mia falls ill with a wasting disease, but fortunately for her the disease gives her the ability to get back what she has lost.
Average Scores:

The Martian
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Excellent story I loved the slow buildup where its not immediately apparent that her growth isnt just normal recovery from the illness until she just continues to improve beyond where she was before getting sick and eventually realises her power and begins using it to her benefit
Deux Anges
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good story I liked the stealing of boobs from other girls idea My only comment is that there wasnt quite enough descriptions of her boobs and a bit of boob play would be nice too Nevertheless its enjoyable Keep up the good work
Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Enjoyed the story  Have her meet a boy with the same power  Then have them meet Superman and Wonder Woman
Nikochan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really nice attribute tefth story Good job
GeoffK
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
In case anyone is worried this is a real storynot a virus  Its a typical BE vampire story where a girl steals beauty and bust size  Its fairly welldone although it never really clicked for me
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