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The Overflowing Bra

codexdrinker
Emma's Treatment
When Emma tries a new drug to help her crippled milk glands recover, her body reacts strongly.
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Lily Bunny
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Over all a pretty good read Lots of sexy bits although I felt like the character was extremely Mary Sueish even before she transformed into a near goddess like figure she seemed a bit too flawless rnrnYou also kept mentioning some event that happened I think it was some world wide event that changed humanity but it was never explained what it was or what significance it had on the plot rnrnA bit rocky but was still enjoyable 
FireFox
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Your writing improved considerably since your previous upload  Like someone else my main complaint was the lack of context regarding The Change what changed when did it happen why etc
assorted
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Interesting Is this part of a larger world You mention the change a number of times but never nail down precisely what it entailed
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