The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Specter09
Yuris Antiques: Spectras Mind
A couple with marital issues stumbles upon a mysterious antique store where they find a board game that changes their lives. 
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MrHHH
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought it was a solid story but I dont get why you had to add TG
Daelon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I read both of your stories over on xyz and theyre great I hope you keep writing As others have said this is the tea leaves story not spectras mind  I think you mixed up your uploads
anony123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Totally love both of these storiesthough this is the incorrect file Yurias Tea leaves especially is fantastic I hope you write more like it
anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Fyi you seem to have uploaded the wrong story
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