The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mich
Image Problems
Sometimes you're offered just one wish, but at a terrible cost. When Jeni is offered to have a wish for more attention granted, the payment appears to be exactly what she has always wanted, in a curvier, sexier figure. The game will only continue for every new sexual conquest she makes, and the growing lover finds herself wondering if she'll ruin herself before she truly gets what she thinks she wants.
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TheMostMassive
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
The ending was very lackluster. It feels as though the story just comes to a stop with no knowledge of the main character's desires or choices. It certainly needs an epilogue. I also appreciate the use of adult characters over the teenagers in stories like Erect Desire and Rebellious Phase. It's also nice to have a more down to earth story as compared to the weirdness of Fetish Fuel and Wants and Needs. 
a
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
This is a fine story and you are a great writer, but this story felt bland, and was missing the weird and wonderful transformation content you have shown such talent for in your previous works.
SoylentOrange
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another exemplary offering from Mich. While lacking the variety of Fetish Fuel or Needs and Wants, and stopping before the truly massive sizes of Fat Stacks and Secret Powder, Image Problems nonetheless paints n intimate portrait of one woman's growth into a walking goddess of fertility. A few small typos here and there, but nothing to really distract from how great the story is and how welldeveloped even the minor characters were.

Great job, man. YOu've earned a rest. d
Yes Please
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Just great. Your stories are the best.
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