The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Blake Isaac Gordon
Cost of Compunction, The
Grace is a girl having trouble in college. Who would of thought a wish as simple as "I wish people would be nice to me." would end up'll see.
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

A fairly good read. However, it was written with Microsoft word and saved as HTML. As such, it's fairly broken HTML.

Hint: is a free download, and it's more responsive. (Yes, Word loads quicker - but that's only because much of it loads when you boot your system, so it starts the race half-way down the track. Compare speeds after loading has finished, and you'll find OOo does not slow down as often. Of course, this is more obvious on older hardware.)

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