The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Plato Voltaire
Big Blue Marble
A group of fanatical criminals and pirates intend to pick up where Mr Big left off. Can Ensign David Carson and his friends save the universe from the horror of wanton breast expansion? Find out in the 'biggest' Blue Undercover story to-date!
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I've read quite a few stories on this site, but I have strayed away from your stories for a while, though I'm not sure why I have for so long. Upon reading "big blue marble", however, I found that my avoidance of your stories was heavily mistaken. This story is one of the best I have ever read on the overflowing bra, without question. The plot was incredibly well though out, the characters so incredibly realistic and lifelike, developing as the story progresses. My only qualms with this story were the few technical errors(like the fact that you spell suprise "suprize"), and the overuse of the term "watermellon bust"; it may be a strong phrase in describing breast size, but it loses its value when used so much. To anyone who is reading this review, deciding whether or not to read this story, I'm going to tell you right now: If you are just looking for a plain old BE story, look elsewhere. However, if you are looking for a long, captivating novel, with a little BE thrown in to the mix, then "big blue marble" is for you. My absolute congratulations to Plato Voltaire for this truly outstanding work of fiction.

Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4


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