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Caroline's Return [Simon 3.5]
Caroline (from Simon 3) gets a boyfriend and shows off her new... skill...
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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
OMG, I am so happy I read this one. The previous two were bad and horrible. This has more of the humor of the first one. Good job. One item... memories should be mammaries. 
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Seemed a bit short. Otherwise it's a good story IF you know about the main character from following the "Simon's Story" series; otherwise you could be a little confused.

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