The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Writers Block
A struggling author has his dream come true...
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Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

A pretty good story overall, the odd dodgy bit of wirting but nothing that detrated from the story, nicely done.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very, very well done. I hope you write more. :-D

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

The opening conceit really gave us a fast hook into knowing and liking the narrator. The transformation was well-described, editing was excellent, and this is a really great little story.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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