The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Gene Therapy
A scientific experiment goes awry. But is that such a bad thing?
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Above Ground Pool
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Honestly, not bad news!...

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very well written story, the subject matter generally isn't up my alley, but you did make the characters, especially the main one, very realistic. Could work on your BE description though.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Much like a Greapos story; but with a much happier ending. The B.E. needs a bit of work though. But it's a wonderful lactating sex-fest.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I don't know why you deadpanned this story in the readme. It was fine the way it was, just focusing on one transformation.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

gOOd job

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good overall, not too strong on the Breast Growth more focused on the lactation and shrink/growth. A very good story overall despite not being my personal preferences with the genre.

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