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The Overflowing Bra

Everwynd Nights
The introductory story of Amadre, an elven sorceress, who accidentally becomes cursed with gem that makes her more buxom and horny every time she casts a spell.
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

LOL!!! it is a DND style setting. I noticed because 1. the name Everwynd nights? lol, the game neverwinter nights is a DND style. And i played (long time ago) Bauldurs Gate 2, the rings are all like that and the style to identify the magical items.

overall, i still liked it and am looking forward to the next in the series

A Nonny Mouse
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great setup, for love of all that's good don't leave this hanging too long. :)

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great start. Nice character development. Creative. Nice to see an author take time to set the stage (which makes the payoff all the more worthwhile!). Looking forward to more installments.

Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Only a little BE. Just a few errors. I liked the story, but it's incomplete -- that's why I gave it such ratings. It'd be much easier on the reader if, at the start, the author gave the info that this is just the first chapter, and is not yet complete.

Amber H.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very nice, I hope you keep on writing this! It was very detailed overall and the characters were more three dimensional than you usually get around here.

Also, I am hopelessly enchanted by sword and sorcery settings, even if they're not BE stories. It was all the damsel in distress things from when I was little, I think.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I liked it. It's a good story and I look forward to the next part.

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