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The Overflowing Bra

Everwynd Nights - Chapter 2
Part two of the continuing story of Amadre and Talvia.  When Amadre makes her feelings known to Talvia, it's not only their lust for each that grows.  Includes a cameo by the main villainess and the introduction of a new character, Tsutanai, a rather unlucky priest.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is better then most D&D games ive played, cant wait for chapter 3, keep the boobs growin and the women horny...

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Why foes this feel like a proper D&D game? I swear I have played with people like this. Great story.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

perfect, hope they get busty again :D

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