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The Overflowing Bra

Accounts of a Tit Goddess - Part One
Part one of a new series. Melanie was once an ordinary girl. Now her life is a paradise of sex, lactation, and ever growing tits. A tale told to set the stage.
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Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

More narrative than BE focused.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A very interesting start, could stand alone..but please don't let it.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really love your writing style and after reading Honey and Lemon, I'm wondering, where's part two?! Upload it if you can :)

Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I thought the account of her tit growth could have been elaborated a bit more. But maybe that's in an upcoming episode?

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good stuff so far. Looking forward to more.

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