The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

WANK Magazine #3
Hot off the presses, it's WANK Magazine #3! Alphie's girlfriend appears in a photoshoot for the magazine, and they decide to go over the results together.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excellent story. I loved how each woman upgraded to the current standard.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story i would suggest the next one could be where the male reader turns into a female or have the reader switch bodies with the female model also make them longer

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Good job. My only request is that it be longer!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Another great WANK story--keep them (and me) coming!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

This has the be one of the first things I've seen here worth reading since W. Pratt's stories.

P.S. Thank you for using a spell checker, not putting it some bizarre format, and for sharing your creativity.

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Your work is great, I loved #2 & this one was just as good. You never see really good multiple stories anymore. Great job & can't wait to see if you'll continue writing.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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