The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mammary Mentality
Another one of I3reacl's stories from DeviantArt. I quite enjoyed this one and saved it before his DA account was deleted. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Short and sweet. Great technical, character and BE descriptions. I was hoping there would be sex or an orgasm or something, so I can't give it a perfect rating.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Ok, I'm sorry to have to be a bit critical here, but while the growth description is very detailed and the writing quality itself is good, what this story lacks is description of how/what she FEELS while growing. There's a brief mention of a tingling in her breasts, and maybe a handful other phrases here and there, but compared to the detail put into the growth itself, the sensations are practically nonexistent.

Since description like that is very important to me, this story only get's a 3 for enjoyment and 4 for description from me.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Lily Bunny - I've uploaded a new version of the story that includes both the pdf and a .zip file. I also took a few minutes to clean up some typos within the story.

Lily Bunny
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

As per usual, I will give all fives to not disrupt the rating.

I was just wondering if it would be possible to get either an .rtf or .txt file version of this story? I am legally blind and .pdf file gives me issues. I was able to read the last story just fine., I was just hoping this one could get a different format that I could read.

Thank you.

Mr Gorpthorp
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This was one of my favorites. I love the slow process from tiny to stacked!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I'm so happy to be seeing his stories surfacing on here. Every one of them was such a delight to read. I especially loved the therapist character on this one, although I feel as if it dragged a bit in the middle with the patient. Thank you for bringing this to OFB! :)

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