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The Overflowing Bra

A Gift and a Test Part 6: Save the World
The sex is always kinkiest just before the dawn. Or... something like that. Jack & co. are in a race against time to track down some final crucial powers and put together a fucking-based cure for world hunger - but there is a lot standing in their way, from the remnants of a PMB army to none other than Kandi Young. (Download contains all 6 parts of the now-complete story - the length of a novel in all! Thanks to everyone who read along with Jack's ludicrous adventures.)
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
More please.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
greast story
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent work, a very fun read! Technically excellent, great character development, a really fun plot, and great story telling. I really enjoyed the kinks you used and my only complaint is that these scenes were not nearly long enough. I would have enjoyed three or four times as much development and description in the dirty parts, especially because you did use some kinks that don't get written about nearly as much as I would like. So I hope in your next work you will consider spending more time on these areas. In any case, I very much look forward to your next release!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved the story! Sad that this was the last part :'(

Rols Garten
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Good story, read the whole thing in a single day so I'll be reviewing the series as a whole. Though I felt that everything after Jack got taken to the factory dragged a bit, but there was still plenty of good stuff in there like the orgy with the super heroines or the meetings with his old X-Class mates. I was also a bit dissapointed that the AI war was just kind of swept under the rug but I also couldn't imagine how you'd make an AI war sexy so I'll let it slide.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I loved the story, I also liked the way that it ended. Kinda makes me want to see what happens next in their travel to eternity :)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

An excellent epic. This would make a great big-budget Hollywood movie, aside from the fact that it's a little too, uh, sexual for that. (Besides, Hollywood seems to really only be interested in existing properties at this point.)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Thank you. I quite thoroughly enjoyed the story and no it is not enough there can never be enough! All joking aside if there is one thing I am mildly put out about is that you never quite went for the "all the way through" scene. But all thing considered? I will be rereading this again. :)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome story

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent read! I need to high five the author.

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