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The Overflowing Bra

Liquid Helium
A scientist has his girlfriend drink some liquid helium -- and it expands.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well written, the description is vivid and easy to understand, a well-done piece.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Fantastic.... now, if only it was set outdoors; would have been fun for that helium to give her a really floating experience!

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