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The Overflowing Bra

Bigger Sister Part 1
Candace has always lived in the shadow of her hotter, more outgoing twin sister and the comparison bothers her more than ever now that they're sharing a flat while attending Uni. When Candace discovers a genie in a bottle, her wish that her sister wasn't the biggest bimbo in the school doesn't come true in the way she expects. This is the first part of a new story that I (Frig) intend to expand and continue according to requests from patrons, but the whole story will eventually be posted when complete.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really hope these sisters wind up together! What a fun, sexy story you have written here. 
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This is pretty great. This is probably the first time I've seen a bimboization story that's actually pretty positive and doesn't make me feel sick for reading it. It's heartfelt and honest. I like that. 
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like it. Nice to see bimbo porn on here. Few quibbles
1  all the Eurospeak is really hard to parse. Fancy posh etc was a little jarring.
2  Not enough description of the BE sequence. She's growing Jcup tits, which I think means she would be both bigger and more perfect than Hitomi Tanaka, and the most we get is yeah they were huge. Need a little more in that.
3  incomplete. 

Keep writing, though, I like it.
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