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The Overflowing Bra

Bimbo Potion: Revenge, Ch. 01
Synopsis: Amy is tired of being pushed around by the girls at work, so she decides to get even with the help of a bimbo potion she finds on the internet.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really like the subtle influences the contamination has on Amy, how her body is growing more and more suited for sex but she's in denial that she's still in control. Nice job on the nipple and pussy growth, some writers only focus on breasts and maybe the ass but this potion is a lot more thorough. Even though there hasn't been significant growth yet the scene was wellwritten and detailed. Also like how there are multiple women for this with each expected to have a different experience, with only Amy knowing what's really going on. Only issue I have is you haven't describe the before image of what each woman looks like. You described Amy some but it got a little confusing like when her breasts were growing because you don't mention how big they were before until after the changes are over and done. But overall good chapter.
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