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The Overflowing Bra

Fidget
Perfect Girlfriend Juice, Ch. 01
A tainted batch of sports drink transforms women into the ideal girlfriend of the nearest guy. BE is featured, but not focused.
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Perfect girlfriend
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not too much BE, but very hot story 
namrego
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nicely done!
Mango Tree
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it! Especially the way she is conspiring in her own submission. Wish there were more stories like that.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A perfect girlfriend would want to make her boyfriend happy by making him perfect from his perspective in every way.  

Plus she should want four other girls just like her to make him really happy.
nappa
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
This should be a series 
Big Boy
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very nice story, though the BE description could have been more detailed.
It's a pity to stopp after one can of this drink, aren't there any other subjects who got a can of Perfect Girlfriend Juice?
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