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The Overflowing Bra

The Apple Doesn't Fall Far from the Tree, Ch. 02
Josh and Amy take their relationship to the next level. Josh finally confronts his father about the football's effects. This chapter focuses on other developments, so there is very little BE, but it will be back in Ch 03!
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Honey Badger
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I agree with Roid, it makes more sense for their brains to be fried with hormones than to be stupid
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow.  Ive enjoyed this story far more than anything else recently.

Love the descriptions of biological urge to breed.

No sense in making them stupid, if a bit enslaved by their hormones.  Im a big meathead and an engineer.  Big jock does not necessarily equate to big dumb jock.
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