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The Overflowing Bra

ex-Commander Sakis, worn out veteran of the Star Legion, is stranded on a backward planet with the aristocratic and beautiful Juli, whose diplomatic mission Sakis had been meant to guard before disaster struck the galaxy. Now everything Sakis served has been destroyed, so she rededicates herself to helping beautiful Juli rebuild. She could hardly dream of what that will mean. NOTE: this story is fairly extreme and has some weird parts. Also, yes, Sakis is inspired by another famous character whose name begins and ends with the same letters, but only a loose resemblance is intended.
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