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Madison: The Jezebel of Elk County, chapter 1
Part 1 of a companion piece and prequel to the Mallory series. Cousin Madison packs the biggest tits in rural Elk County and isn't shy about using them to get what she wants, leaving a trail of human wreckage in her wake. But as a new threat to her reign takes shape, Madison is going to have to sink to new levels of guile and ruthlessness - and she's gonna love every minute of it.
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Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Should be either be a prelude to a full story, or first chapter of a longer series.

The tags used are mostly missing from the story.

I like where this appears to be going. Hopefully she ends up truly immense.
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This isn't complete enough of a story to post, in my opinion. None of the tags or anything mentioned in your summary happens in the item you posted. I would combine it with later parts once they are done. 
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