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The Overflowing Bra

Third Time's the Charm
Crystalynne casts a spell that changes her looks to what men want. Obviously a fantasy story.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

What an inventive and original take on BE. I'm rather partial to fantasy settings, and the one you've created is quite good and the details are spread around very well. The characters themselves had substance for as short as the story is, and were fleshed out--not painfully drawn out. Most of all, you didn't skimp on the sex or the BE. And multiple BE scenes with variety thrown in! Excellent work.

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