The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Fret Pearson
Bikini Beach House Carwash
Wishing to be in a bikini B-movie may not be the wisest choice...
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great plot line and development.  Especially effective were the mental alterations that the characters go through as they morph to fit the needs of the story they've been injected into.  Tightly written and also IMHO an effective use of foreshadowing.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Love bimbo stories. And TG stories. This was both of that. 10/10

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is one of the alltime-great tg stories. For all intents it's practically perfect. Highly enjoyable.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

wow this one I got too admit is great story. maybe or hopefully write close too it.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

It was very good, although transgender stories always give me the creeps. But what it did do that I liked was create a sense of dread in the main characters, which always makes a story more enjoyable.

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